Cross Country Run
Today was the day that I felt the earth was burning and I felt like I was melting into human liquid. It was our school cross country run. I felt like a bull getting ready to fight a dog and my cheeks were on fire and my heart was pounding inside my body. I was so exasperated.
I was near the finishing line, when I heard the whole school yelling their lungs out. The crowd went wild like a bunch of monkeys fighting over the last banana. As I crossed the finishing line, I was relieved of such tiredness. After I finish I was so proud of myself and so happy that I tried my best in the Cross Country Race.
Hi Uli, I love the line 'the crowd went wild like a bunch of monkeys fighting over the last banana'. You have done a good job at showing not telling your reader how the cross country was for you.
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