A hot sunny day
It was a hot sunny day. I was really hot and my feet was burning like lava . Oh my god I feel like my face is on fire. the hot burning sun is killing me. What is that? I see water. That is what I need. I run and jump in the water. I feel much better.
Nice creative paragraph Uli. I like how you used a question in it to get the audiences attention.
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